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A wait to depart...



Placing each feet
following the other,
enduring the heat
the sand exposes...

I had to move on,
i said to myself...

Relishing the cool shadows,
my own,
and watching the rows-
their destiny...
It seemed like mine
-endless..

The sun scorches.
But i am in the deepest dark-
never mind brightest torches..
'Oh! my...'
Awakened,
I felt someone
I was revived by,
someone else
apart from me..
She whooshed on my feet,
silent and strong,
me blessed by the meet.
flowing thro me
like a silent cherub
bewitching
every lub and dub...
That awesome second
lasted hours and hours together
making me fond
of all the joy and sorrow
of this new bond.
Then here's
a sudden haul
on my soul
quivering
my stature tall..
I am getting drained
of all the bliss,peace and truth
and being left alone with pain..
Pain alone
and to its fullness...
How long was i to moan?
All my life...?
For this same essence
of me
now, battered and with no offense,
had once shone
with the brightest spirit
and care
in this now-darkest pit...
I had to move on,
i said to myself....
If not for what i was born,
BUT FOR WHAT EVERYONE AWAITS...................................with or without bait.....






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Unknown said…
Hi Catty,

These are the comments from the thailand people about your Poem. Sorry i pusblished your poem there without your permission.

Tick- "Awesome, the poem really links the nature and life"

Thitinath- "Give my hug for her, fine creative activity"

Sansanee and lee- "Good dreamer"

Niphon Nuntophorin(Head)-"Great, is she ur friend??, She created such wonderful and valuable poem, publish a book for her she will become a great poet in india"

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